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I played Bloodborne once after every session I was just angry so I stopped playing lol. Just out of curiosity how many controllers were lost .( I almost broke one myself after losing to the same boss to the umpteenth time)

I’m glad more people are inspired to write more poetry and am excited to see what people will write. I just recently started writing and glad other people tried it too.

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For those that need it.

Truly a talented artist.

Does anyone else read it in a little kids voice in their head or is it just me. Also wow a really tired me is super fucking dark I wrote this shit while I was half asleep.

winner winner Gryphon dinner.

Who can tell me how can tell how many died (the poem has all the info you need). First to answer can have a sneak peek at my next poem : )

That’s the point LOL.

A poem for Luke's Brother The Astronaut

Challenger 1281986

Twinkle Twinkle little Star,

How I wonder how you are.

Up above so bright,

So far away from the night.

What a beautiful ball of flame you became,

Everyone shed a tear when none of you remain.

From the sky you fell and crashed.

Not even two minutes passed.

Your remains in the ocean they did land,

Your funeral was beautiful, dignified, and grand.

Your memory shall forever be cherished,

But we dearly wish you had never perished.

(Changed the ending I didn’t like it and flows better now.)

I wasn't planning on writing Storm/Oscars poem  so soon but I got stuck on Luke's Poem LOL.

Back of the sheet of paper the poem is written on is mostly full of marked out words and a few doodles a few phrases can be made out.

I am an asshole a dick and a cunt,

how can you look up to me runt.

Why the fuck am I trying to rhyme something with cunt you know what fuck it I'm committed now.

Why is this so hard (Scribbled out) said it could  help with (illegible) but now I'm just fucking  frustrated trying to rhyme something with cunt.

I can't decide if I'm going  to burn it or give it to the kid.  Fuck it I'll just keep it hidden for now. I swear to God if anyone finds this I'll (Scribbled over)

Why is writing this stupid poem making me cry I hate it why do I have to feel things why do I Have To Remember. ( Some words were smudged because they got wet).

He is takin the picture.

A Poem written by P/Pedro for Storm/Oscar

Why ?

I am not good or kind I'm nothing so grand,

how can you say what I need to hear while holding my hand.

I am not strong you saw me break and cry,

how can you call me strong and look me in the eye.

I am evil, disgusting and vile,

how can you look at me and smile.

I am unable to ever repay what you did for me by the sea,

how can I deserve the gift you made for me.

I am an asshole a dick and a cunt,

how can you love me just being blunt.

I don't deserve to be loved especially by you,

how can I be loved when I can't even say that I love you too.

I totally got RKOd out of nowhere with all the Emotions.

Of course I am reassured by your half funny, half confusing with a dash of eldritch horror meme.

I think if the MC somehow managed to pull this off Niko and Pedro would get a lot closer with each other by planning his demise.

I thought one of these was going to be a rickroll LOL. I'm surprised you didn't it would have been funny

Another poem I shall pen

I hope you also write another again

Kota's Haiku 

Dragon's Dance

There by the River

Fire and water dance together

Water now alone

I don't have any evidence  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ but  Athena is definitely smart and cruel enough to do something like this.

Bad as in not delicious No. Full of Hart Clogging saturated Fats Yes.

I was thinking if I did storm I would write it from P/Pedro's perspective. Greta would be challenging  I don't have much to work with so I'll probably do her later

No he is not ready to taste the (not) Doritos intense Nacho flavor

I think that Athena imprisoned our boi so that they would have an immortal believer so they would never disappear making the Greek pantheon effectively immortal.

Bru honestly I'm surprised Luke's cooking didn't result in casualties. 

I'm planning to write another Poem for Luke and a Haiku for Kota : ). I'm finding it surprisingly fun because writing it from the protagonist's viewpoint is challenging and fun.  Any input form you guys would be appreciated for ideas for other poems. 

Can't wait to see how it looks when your finished : )

I can't un see it now YOU HAVE CURSED ME!

Thank you this is my first Poem I kind of wrote it on a whim I was inspired one day and just wrote. I let the muses guide me :)

I believe it is from Poseidon it makes the most logical sense considering it probably wasn't P/Pedro's Grandfather. The Letter (to me at least) felt like a father apologizing for failing his child when they needed him. 

A Poem For Asterion

I See your fur as White as Snow, 

your muscles trained by your bow.

I hear the sound of your lyre,

your hooves as you climb ever higher.

I feel your hand in mine,

your strength divine.

I taste your lips sweet as wine,

your cooking just as fine.

I Smell your body it is like the sea,

your scent strong and princely.

I Love you my handsome Moo,

I Know you love me too.

No you

Post fits this thread better LOL

Before I go into the theories that have been bouncing around in my head I must say hats of to the team behind this magnificent story just (Chefs kiss).

1. Oscar/Storm is or at lest is a piece of Asterion's divinity that the god's took from him and was born when one the god's ( I'm thinking Hermes) got Oscar's/Storm's mother pregnant in order to Give Asterion his divinity back ( I'm only guessing about the why this seems the most logical). I am making this guess mainly on what the narrator said in Ch. 18 when Oscar/Storm and Asterion meet in front of the hotel "From the slit in the star-spangled horizon, he comes. The drop of blood" this i felt was a way to signal us as the reader that they are more closely related than it would seem a first glance. We also know that having divinity means the person has ichor flowing through them and we also know from conversations with Robert that Asterion no longer has his divinity.

2. Luke's Brother died on the January 28, 1986 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster. I base my theory on the the conversation you have with Luke when you give him time off he mentions a really difficult test that he and his brother needed for their dream job. I believe it is reasonable to assume that Luke and his brother were trying to become Astronauts based on Luke's love for the stars and the fact in Luke1 we see him in Cape Canaveral waiting to see the shuttle launch.

3. The Protagonists of the story is subconsciously bringing in gay Mythical creatures in to the Hotel. I don't have much to say other than how unlikely it is for Mythical creatures that also happen to be gay to come to the Hotel and become a part of the Hotel's Staff.

4. The Protagonist was influenced/ Possessed by Hades when Hermes was about to kill Argos/Nikos in Ch.18. I base my theory on the nearly rotten flower smell the Protagonist smells now this by itself could mean anything but Hermes mutters a name to himself which means someone he knows interfered and it stands to reason that Hades interfered to prevent Hermes from killing Argos/Nikos.

5. The Protagonist is either a descendent of one of the God's, or Phoneos or perhaps a combination of the three. The God's wouldn't just hand the Deed to any Human they clearly chose the Protagonist for a reason he is clearly Special in some way The God's may be desperate but they spent some time searching for someone to fill the role as Master.

6. The Protagonist can not be a descendant of Theseus. At first glance it would seem very likely that a descendent of Theseus Shall free the minotaur once again from his labyrinth given the themes of recursion however in Fragment B of the Labyrinth's Constitution it states that "The heroes of Bright-Eyed Athena and their lineages are forevermore forbidden from taking the role of Master." thus it is impossible for  the protagonist to be a descendent of Theseus.

I would love to hear other peoples theories. I'm also open to hear if you disagree on my theories and why

LOL (Nice Art BTW)

It would be hilarious if you could dress him in the clothes of the other Staff members and see what their reactions would be. but what I want to see most is our moo wearing a leather (Not cow leather for obvious reasons) jacket and white sleeveless shit. I loved everything about it on Storm/Oscar and I think Asterion will rock it.

I just figured that if this (if my theory is correct)Hades is one extremely pissed off and two only gave a short order.  Also it has been a couple of centuries since the events when we saw Hades last so he could have changed since Asterion was punished. 

Before I go into the theories that have been bouncing around in my head I must say hats of to the team behind this magnificent story just (Chefs kiss).

1. Oscar/Storm is or at lest is a piece of Asterion's divinity that the god's took from him and was born when one the god's ( I'm thinking Hermes) got Oscar's/Storm's mother pregnant in order to Give Asterion his divinity back ( I'm only guessing about the why this seems the most logical). I am making this guess mainly on what the narrator said in Ch. 18 when Oscar/Storm and Asterion meet in front of the hotel "From the slit in the star-spangled horizon, he comes. The drop of blood" this i felt was a way to signal us as the reader that they are more closely related than it would seem a first glance. We also know that having divinity means the person has ichor flowing through them and we also know from conversations with Robert that Asterion no longer has his divinity.

2. Luke's Brother died on the January 28, 1986 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster. I base my theory on the the conversation you have with Luke when you give him time off he mentions a really difficult test that he and his brother needed for their dream job. I believe it is reasonable to assume that Luke and his brother were trying to become Astronauts based on Luke's love for the stars and the fact in Luke1 we see him in Cape Canaveral waiting to see the shuttle launch.

3. The Protagonists of the story is subconsciously bringing in gay Mythical creatures in to the Hotel. I don't have much to say other than how unlikely it is for Mythical creatures that also happen to be gay to come to the Hotel and become a part of the Hotel's Staff.

4. The Protagonist was influenced/ Possessed by Hades when Hermes was about to kill Argos/Nikos in Ch.18. I base my theory on the nearly rotten flower smell the Protagonist smells now this by itself could mean anything but Hermes mutters a name to himself which means someone he knows interfered and it stands to reason that Hades interfered to prevent Hermes from killing Argos/Nikos.

I would love to hear other peoples theories. I'm also open to hear if you disagree on my theories and why